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13 March 2007 @ 07:19 pm
 

This community is dead already? Nonsense! I won't have it! ::kicks the comm:: LIVE I SAY!

So I never really thought I'd find something worth posting here, but it's been a good long while since I've seen a case of Mary Sue-itis THIS bad. I honestly couldn't make it past chapter two...let alone find it in me to leave a long enough review.

Title: Mute
Culprit: Coco Gash Jirachi
Victim(s): No survivors
Rating: T
Badfic Rating: IT'S OVER 9000!!!!
Notes: Ohhh dear, where to begin...We've got a Sue named Gash who was traumatized by the hospitalization of her sister Serenity Emily and chooses not to speak. English. But apparently she's fluent in Portuguese, Chinese, Russian, Icelandic, Zulu, and anything else she can think to cram in there, and has absolutely no problem speaking any of those. So despite the trauma, she's still determined to win the prize money from the Duelist Kingdom GX tournament to save her sister. Also, her friend Nicole goes by the nickname Aniki...which makes plenty of sense.

That's about as far as I got before my brain imploded. Enjoy.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3426479/1/

 
 
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Qu-ko, the person on the internetaphotic on March 14th, 2007 01:18 am (UTC)
Your icon's awesomeness level is OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND
Qu-ko, the person on the internetaphotic on March 14th, 2007 01:19 am (UTC)
Also the story suxxors. I'm just lazy and am probably blocked on at least two accounts on her part.

Eh, well. Let her suck if she wants.

Because obviously blocking people is going to make her a better writer. ;\
dancingkirbydancingkirby on March 14th, 2007 02:56 am (UTC)
W00t! Thank heavens that i don't have to resort to a quadruple post!

Well, this person DOES have good grammar at least. Grammar counts a lot in my book. But then again...pairing up her Sue with Harley kind of ruins all that.

Yeah, I've gotten into a bit of a Harley obsession lately. I blame Togepi.
Oroko: Kenzan and a Shrimpshadowbabyoroko on March 14th, 2007 03:04 am (UTC)
XDD The flaming gay guy with purple hair from Pokemon? I heart him.
Qu-ko, the person on the internetaphotic on March 14th, 2007 03:17 am (UTC)
EVERYONE HEART HARLEY! :D
reaperrain on May 1st, 2007 08:36 pm (UTC)
Lord, not Coco Gash...she's one of my reviewers, 'borrowed' (I use that term because it doesn't follow the exact same storyline, just the concept) one of my ideas and used it to write her own story. I wouldn't mind, and I'm thankful she's mentioned my story in her opening chapter, but she's, well, not a very good author. I can't help but feel she's murdered the concept a little bit.
...Although, to be fair, I kind of got it from reading far to many Yami/Yugi pastfics. Call me a copycat if you must, I was trying to make something original out of something...not...orginal.
*shiver* I was a bit of a fanbrat when I started on FF.net...but I snapped out of it pretty quick. I (think) I can take constructive criticism when I see it now.